The EYE

The EYE is an original short-story I wrote for my Junior English class. We had read 1984 and were supposed to make our own distopia story.
I posted The EYE under 1984's category on Fanfiction.net but me and my friend were thinking of making it into a full story with my version that I handed in for a grade being the short version.

Summary:
In, 2032, a world where everything is monitored by the EYE four teenage boys set out to stop it and come home heroes. They've been planning a trip to the EYE for several weeks now and have gotten a believable excuse to not tip off the EYE of their plan.

~Spoilers~ (Highlight to read)
Since it's a distopia story it doesn't end well, obviously.  The four boys make it to the EYE, which is basically the building at the center of the dome they live in where supposedly people monitor everyone(much like in 1984 with Big Brother), but there's no happy ending.
~Spoilers End~

I wont give too much away. If you're interested feel free to read it here: